Haiku

My very first attempt at a haiku. Let me know what you think. Oh, and be gentle…..lol :)

Balmy summer moon…

echoing through the forest

 the Whippoorwills song.

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My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content. I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure. I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul. I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.

18 responses to “Haiku

  1. I love haiku. It makes the mind slow down. I’ll post some later to share with you. Great writing.

  2. Hi, I’ve nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award, check out http://jenchay.wordpress.com/2012/01/26/one-lovely-blog-award/ for details! Jen

  3. Beautiful Haiku, you have the art of creating haikus and i really love that because as for myself i haven’t been able to master the art of writing haikus yet..Like i said, amazing!! :-)

    • Thanks Abi, I’m glad you liked it. This was actually my very first attempt at one, so your compliment makes me smile. I need a lot more practice to be as good as I would like to be. Thanks again!
      Celeste

  4. It is lovely! an excellent first :)

  5. What I love about reading haikus is being able to find myself in that moment through the words. I’ll dream of trees, moons and birds tonight :) . Good work!

  6. Very nice, you painted the picture nicely, alerting all the senses!

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