After the storm

A true to life event, a sensory poem where I attempt to convey my deep joy and emotion in a memorable moment I had with nature.

The atmosphere was electrified

from the intensity of the passing storm.

A light rain falling, so softly

like the petals of a rose

and the air smelled pristine

of new earth

fresh and clean.

The clouds were dark

and menacing

but lined in silver

as a white sun

broke through an opening

and shined it’s vivid light

upon the earth.

The raindrops reflected the light

and sparkled like white crystals

as it fell with such grace

from the heavens.

The shadows cast on the ground

were as of the night

of a full moon

accentuating and animating

every shrub and tree.

The contrast between

light and dark

was stark

but breathtaking in the

beauty of it’s harmony,

light and shadow creating together

a surreal and otherworldly scene.

And as I stood in the midst

of this natural wonder

I let my senses take over

letting them grow and reach out

as far out as they would go,..

and my soul was caught up

in admiration and surprise,

taken in absolute awe.

I was elated

wrapped up in a cocoon

of magic and reverie

as my mind, body and soul

answered mother nature

in her spectacular beauty.

I was helpless

to sound out a word

that would be sufficient enough

to convey the peace

and tranquility I was a part of,

so I gave myself over

to the sublime perfection

of the moment,

to the scene before my eyes.

And the instant I did this

I was lifted high in flight

on the wings of joy

soaring on a perpetual wave of bliss

that lasted until my head

rested upon my pillow

and sleep carried me away

with lovely dreams

in the night.

~ Celeste ~

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About celestealluvial

My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content. I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure. I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul. I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.

24 responses to “After the storm

  1. I began smiling as soon as i read… what an awe that had to be, placed in that perfect flight with such a powerful sight! :)

    • I called Jeremy and Jared out to the porch to witness it with me….we were all in silent awe, even Jared, for a few moments….the turkeys were gobbling, everything was surreal….it was one of those special larger than life moments….a rare scene to witness,,,and I know because I am always watching and searching for beauty right out my front door….thanks for the comment…. :)

  2. You really know how to send people on a psychological roller coaster and transpose their thoughts in a fantasy land

    • I am not sure how to reply to such an enormous comment, but I am flattered and I thank you….
      I appreciate your visit and for you sharing your thoughts….please come again….
      love and light to you…. :)

  3. Great imagery! You conveyed your emotion of the moment splendidly.

  4. i felt every word within…i loved the poem…it left me speechless but full of joy!

  5. :) Vibrating with beauty.:) I love the smell of the storm the most but that glow between dark and light–you captured it all here, gorgeous.:)
    -Jennifer

    • Why thank you my friend….so happy you enjoyed it…I value your words to me for I am a big fan of your own poetry…..thanks so much for visiting and sharing your thoughts with me….

  6. amazing! Thank you for sharing your miracle joy! Love to you, Linda

  7. Such a clearly illustrated image. I could feel the hair on my arms standing from the electricity!

  8. Another insight into your beautiful soul of sensitivity ~ Bless you.

  9. Moments like this, that make time stand still because they transcend even their own sheer beauty, carry us through much – and make life worthwhile. Absolutely beautiful, Celeste, love this. ~ Julie xoxox

  10. I could really feel your energy and emotion in this. Thank you for sharing!

  11. Beautiful emotions, memories expressed in an almost surrealistic manner – but with shades of physical reality coupled with subliminal joy. I felt that you spoke well and from your heart. Lovely.

  12. This is beautiful, the details are amazingly vivid.. I would really like to use it as a writing prompt for my 5th grade students. Would you let me know if that is ok and if so, how you would like me to credit you?

  13. I love the way you just take your readers on a magic fantasy trip with you in your writing… shadows and surrender — you have so many wonderful elements here — love it!

  14. Beautiful use of language and imagery. As a “nature boy” I can’t help but love this.

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