A true to life event, a sensory poem where I attempt to convey my deep joy and emotion in a memorable moment I had with nature.
The atmosphere was electrified
from the intensity of the passing storm.
A light rain falling, so softly
like the petals of a rose
and the air smelled pristine
of new earth
fresh and clean.
The clouds were dark
and menacing
but lined in silver
as a white sun
broke through an opening
and shined it’s vivid light
upon the earth.
The raindrops reflected the light
and sparkled like white crystals
as it fell with such grace
from the heavens.
The shadows cast on the ground
were as of the night
of a full moon
accentuating and animating
every shrub and tree.
The contrast between
light and dark
was stark
but breathtaking in the
beauty of it’s harmony,
light and shadow creating together
a surreal and otherworldly scene.
And as I stood in the midst
of this natural wonder
I let my senses take over
letting them grow and reach out
as far out as they would go,..
and my soul was caught up
in admiration and surprise,
taken in absolute awe.
I was elated
wrapped up in a cocoon
of magic and reverie
as my mind, body and soul
answered mother nature
in her spectacular beauty.
I was helpless
to sound out a word
that would be sufficient enough
to convey the peace
and tranquility I was a part of,
so I gave myself over
to the sublime perfection
of the moment,
to the scene before my eyes.
And the instant I did this
I was lifted high in flight
on the wings of joy
soaring on a perpetual wave of bliss
that lasted until my head
rested upon my pillow
and sleep carried me away
with lovely dreams
in the night.
~ Celeste ~

















I began smiling as soon as i read… what an awe that had to be, placed in that perfect flight with such a powerful sight!
I called Jeremy and Jared out to the porch to witness it with me….we were all in silent awe, even Jared, for a few moments….the turkeys were gobbling, everything was surreal….it was one of those special larger than life moments….a rare scene to witness,,,and I know because I am always watching and searching for beauty right out my front door….thanks for the comment….
thank you for sharing! it will be in my visions through out today….
You really know how to send people on a psychological roller coaster and transpose their thoughts in a fantasy land
I am not sure how to reply to such an enormous comment, but I am flattered and I thank you….
I appreciate your visit and for you sharing your thoughts….please come again….
love and light to you….
Great imagery! You conveyed your emotion of the moment splendidly.
I am thrilled that you feel that way and thanks for saying so my friend….
i felt every word within…i loved the poem…it left me speechless but full of joy!
So grateful that you shared your kind thoughts, Wendell, and glad you enjoyed it,,,,
-Jennifer
Why thank you my friend….so happy you enjoyed it…I value your words to me for I am a big fan of your own poetry…..thanks so much for visiting and sharing your thoughts with me….
amazing! Thank you for sharing your miracle joy! Love to you, Linda
Thank you my dear friend and it is my pleasure….
love you….xoxo
Such a clearly illustrated image. I could feel the hair on my arms standing from the electricity!
Hi Tom! Thanks so much for visiting and for the compliment….I value your input….please come again soon…..
wooowww oooh wooww!!!
Another insight into your beautiful soul of sensitivity ~ Bless you.
Moments like this, that make time stand still because they transcend even their own sheer beauty, carry us through much – and make life worthwhile. Absolutely beautiful, Celeste, love this. ~ Julie xoxox
I could really feel your energy and emotion in this. Thank you for sharing!
Beautiful emotions, memories expressed in an almost surrealistic manner – but with shades of physical reality coupled with subliminal joy. I felt that you spoke well and from your heart. Lovely.
This is beautiful, the details are amazingly vivid.. I would really like to use it as a writing prompt for my 5th grade students. Would you let me know if that is ok and if so, how you would like me to credit you?
I love the way you just take your readers on a magic fantasy trip with you in your writing… shadows and surrender — you have so many wonderful elements here — love it!
Beautiful use of language and imagery. As a “nature boy” I can’t help but love this.
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