Dark lover (part two)

Please read part one first before reading this. It is the post right before this one….also remember these are first drafts, I wrote these first two parts within a couple of hours….I know they still need some work….thanks and enjoy! ;)

*erotic content*

Now in the confines of his chambers

this entity now my dark lord

and lover

he materializes before me

and my eyes see him for the first time.

I gasp aloud

and am taken back

by the sheer menacing darkness

radiating around him.

He is frightful to behold

his sharp features penetrating

and terrifying, god like.

But at the same time

he was so beautiful to behold

having a sensual cruelty to his handsome features

that cut through me to the center

of my being.

His long dark hair carried

the scents of the night,

alive like the night

and his eyes were a striking emerald green

with flecks of golden light

and red flames that flickered in their depths.

And turbulent, raging passion churned within them,

all for me.

The thought of this sent my heart into a gallop

and left my already overwhelmed mind

reeling some more.

 I can do nothing but stare

at this magnificent creature

this man who now holds my soul.

And he is staring right back at me

still as a stone.

Delicious anticipation charges the air

both our desires running wild.

He strides like a panther

coming to stand just inches from me

the air becoming electrified

as we stood so close.

With a long nail he cuts an opening in his chest

and he offered his blood for me to drink.

Instead of repulsion my appetite grew

and saliva built up in my mouth

craving the rich taste of him.

The heat between my thighs now

felt like liquid fire

a hot spring of inferno…

and I wanted all of him right then and there

and then some.

I wanted to take all he was

as much as I could fit inside my body and being.

In response to my thoughts

a sinister laugh escaped his full lips

booming and echoing throughout the underground chambers

for he knows I am his and cannot refuse him.

I press my lips to the cut on his chest

and let a little of the warmth seep in my mouth

and like a whirlwind hunger punched me in the gut

and I drank deeply from him.

A hiss escaped from his lips

and he threw back his head

and roared

rocking the structures surrounding us

and quaking my insides like a tempest.

As I drink I am filled with ecstasy

the sensations so dizzying I can barely contain them.

Raw power and erotic bliss found and filled every wound

strengthening me

and radiated from every pore.

He snaked his strong arm around me and

wound his long fingers through my hair

pressing me harder to him.

I reciprocated the gesture by drinking harder and faster

and his breathing grew to a heavy pant,

a smile of pain mixed with pleasure on his face.

Too soon he broke away from me,

Black blood dribbling down his chest

and staining the earth beneath us.

 I licked up every last bit that

had strewn down to his hard stomach

making him hiss yet again

and shutter almost violently.

Immediately he picked me up effortlessly

and licked the corners of my mouth clean…

and then he kissed me hard

his tongue claiming every inch of my mouth.

Things were about to get even hotter

and I wondered if I could handle all of this,

all of him.

Only one way to find out.

And when he began kissing my neck with ferocity

his hard length thickening against my abdomen

I knew I was up for the challenge….

Stay tuned for part three…. ;)

~ Celeste ~

About celestealluvial

My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content. I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure. I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul. I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.

11 responses to “Dark lover (part two)

  1. Celeste, you are really getting a kick out of this, aren’t you?

    • Granbee, I am having a blast….I have been sharing pieces and ideas of a novel I want to write….been a dream Of mine to write a book since childhood….I just hope I dont shock the socks off too many of my readers….but I know who I am and where I stand, and I will continue to follow my heart, blazing a trail to pursue my dreams….thank you much for reading and commenting….. xoxo
      bless you…. ;)

  2. Celeste, believe me, I am craving the THIRD part, this is so SUPER NATURAL mixed with tinge of bitter and hard core reality!!
    Loved each bit of it!
    Cheers!
    Naima.

    • I am humbled and smiling from your words….I feed off this enthusiasm, and I thank you from my heart for it….Not sure when I will get part 3 out, hopefully soon!….these first 2 parts came to me so quickly, and I had them both written and published within a few hours….so bear with me….I usually write under compulsion, and the best work comes when I am excited and comfortable with the flow Im in…..thanks again so much! xoxo

      • Hey hey hey.. I may be craving this THIRD PART but mind it.. I expect the same quality which ya have been providing us in the last two posts so take your time and MAKE THE THIRD PART BANG ON THE LAST TWO!!!
        I am so loving your blog and your comments.
        Keep Writing and Best Of Luck for the novel!
        Love ya,
        Naima.

  3. I THINK YOU SOULD ALWAYS WRITE WHAT YOU WANT TO WRITE ……
    AND NOT WORRY ………..
    JUST WRITE :) :) :)
    STAND YOUR GROUND AND FOLLOW YOUR HEART …….
    WHAT’S THAT GREAT DR. SEUSS QUOTE – I CAN’T REMEMBER IT – BUT I WILL :) :)
    I THINK YOU HAVE AN AMAZING IMAGINATION :) AND PASSION LIKE A MILLION FIRECRACKERS ….XX
    XOXOXOXOXO
    C

  4. XOXOXOXOXOXO……..Thanks so very much….I am nourished with your kind encouragement….you are a gem….so glad you liked it!
    love love love to you……. :)

  5. You are still spewing the passion with so much intensity. Loving this.

  6. Write that book!! You indeed have a talent to captivate with you words. :)

  7. Intense, dark and certainly erotic. Looking forward to the 3rd installment.

  8. Wow! I don’t even dream of these things in my sleep, and you bring them to life in a day dream of flight…. Very Passionate! thank you for sharing…….

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