Please read part one first before reading this. It is the post right before this one….also remember these are first drafts, I wrote these first two parts within a couple of hours….I know they still need some work….thanks and enjoy!
*erotic content*
Now in the confines of his chambers
this entity now my dark lord
and lover
he materializes before me
and my eyes see him for the first time.
I gasp aloud
and am taken back
by the sheer menacing darkness
radiating around him.
He is frightful to behold
his sharp features penetrating
and terrifying, god like.
But at the same time
he was so beautiful to behold
having a sensual cruelty to his handsome features
that cut through me to the center
of my being.
His long dark hair carried
the scents of the night,
alive like the night
and his eyes were a striking emerald green
with flecks of golden light
and red flames that flickered in their depths.
And turbulent, raging passion churned within them,
all for me.
The thought of this sent my heart into a gallop
and left my already overwhelmed mind
reeling some more.
I can do nothing but stare
at this magnificent creature
this man who now holds my soul.
And he is staring right back at me
still as a stone.
Delicious anticipation charges the air
both our desires running wild.
He strides like a panther
coming to stand just inches from me
the air becoming electrified
as we stood so close.
With a long nail he cuts an opening in his chest
and he offered his blood for me to drink.
Instead of repulsion my appetite grew
and saliva built up in my mouth
craving the rich taste of him.
The heat between my thighs now
felt like liquid fire
a hot spring of inferno…
and I wanted all of him right then and there
and then some.
I wanted to take all he was
as much as I could fit inside my body and being.
In response to my thoughts
a sinister laugh escaped his full lips
booming and echoing throughout the underground chambers
for he knows I am his and cannot refuse him.
I press my lips to the cut on his chest
and let a little of the warmth seep in my mouth
and like a whirlwind hunger punched me in the gut
and I drank deeply from him.
A hiss escaped from his lips
and he threw back his head
and roared
rocking the structures surrounding us
and quaking my insides like a tempest.
As I drink I am filled with ecstasy
the sensations so dizzying I can barely contain them.
Raw power and erotic bliss found and filled every wound
strengthening me
and radiated from every pore.
He snaked his strong arm around me and
wound his long fingers through my hair
pressing me harder to him.
I reciprocated the gesture by drinking harder and faster
and his breathing grew to a heavy pant,
a smile of pain mixed with pleasure on his face.
Too soon he broke away from me,
Black blood dribbling down his chest
and staining the earth beneath us.
I licked up every last bit that
had strewn down to his hard stomach
making him hiss yet again
and shutter almost violently.
Immediately he picked me up effortlessly
and licked the corners of my mouth clean…
and then he kissed me hard
his tongue claiming every inch of my mouth.
Things were about to get even hotter
and I wondered if I could handle all of this,
all of him.
Only one way to find out.
And when he began kissing my neck with ferocity
his hard length thickening against my abdomen
I knew I was up for the challenge….
Stay tuned for part three….
~ Celeste ~
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Celeste, you are really getting a kick out of this, aren’t you?
Granbee, I am having a blast….I have been sharing pieces and ideas of a novel I want to write….been a dream Of mine to write a book since childhood….I just hope I dont shock the socks off too many of my readers….but I know who I am and where I stand, and I will continue to follow my heart, blazing a trail to pursue my dreams….thank you much for reading and commenting….. xoxo
bless you….
Celeste, believe me, I am craving the THIRD part, this is so SUPER NATURAL mixed with tinge of bitter and hard core reality!!
Loved each bit of it!
Cheers!
Naima.
I am humbled and smiling from your words….I feed off this enthusiasm, and I thank you from my heart for it….Not sure when I will get part 3 out, hopefully soon!….these first 2 parts came to me so quickly, and I had them both written and published within a few hours….so bear with me….I usually write under compulsion, and the best work comes when I am excited and comfortable with the flow Im in…..thanks again so much! xoxo
Hey hey hey.. I may be craving this THIRD PART but mind it.. I expect the same quality which ya have been providing us in the last two posts so take your time and MAKE THE THIRD PART BANG ON THE LAST TWO!!!
I am so loving your blog and your comments.
Keep Writing and Best Of Luck for the novel!
Love ya,
Naima.
I THINK YOU SOULD ALWAYS WRITE WHAT YOU WANT TO WRITE ……


AND PASSION LIKE A MILLION FIRECRACKERS ….XX
AND NOT WORRY ………..
JUST WRITE
STAND YOUR GROUND AND FOLLOW YOUR HEART …….
WHAT’S THAT GREAT DR. SEUSS QUOTE – I CAN’T REMEMBER IT – BUT I WILL
I THINK YOU HAVE AN AMAZING IMAGINATION
XOXOXOXOXO
C
XOXOXOXOXOXO……..Thanks so very much….I am nourished with your kind encouragement….you are a gem….so glad you liked it!
love love love to you…….
You are still spewing the passion with so much intensity. Loving this.
Write that book!! You indeed have a talent to captivate with you words.
Intense, dark and certainly erotic. Looking forward to the 3rd installment.
Wow! I don’t even dream of these things in my sleep, and you bring them to life in a day dream of flight…. Very Passionate! thank you for sharing…….