Dark Lover (part three)

I apologize for taking so long to get out this third installment. We have been busy working in our garden preparing for the summer harvest. We are really excited about our garden as it is our first one since our childhoods.

When I began to write Dark Lover, it was intended to be a one part free style poem. But that is certainly not how it turned out. Then I thought oh well, I’ll do two parts. But here I am with part three and working on four. I am pretty certain there will be a part five as well. One again, I will caution my readers that this is erotic content, and this one is even more so than the first two. So you have been warned! Proceed with caution and read at your own risk! LOL

This is purely fiction everyone…..just another faucet of the inner workings of my mind. This is for entertainment purposes and practice for a novel. Please enjoy what you read and feel free to comment. I feed off of all the great feedback you guys give and I appreciate your continued support. And these are first drafts, so I know they are not perfect and need some work…….Thank you and happy reading! :)

*EROTIC AND EXPLICIT CONTENT*

Intense passion washed over me in waves

like a whip lashing away at my senses…

 his kisses were fire

burning me to the core.

The blood I had greedily taken from him

was now burning me from the inside

eating away every trace of my mortality

killing me slowly….

And still I wanted more,

needed more.

I craved him down to the inmost parts of me

a sharp and ravenous hunger

the pain consuming my every thought….

until all that was left was depravity and need

and all I could see, taste, hear or feel was him.

I could not find the words to say

so I let my body do the talking.

Wrapping my legs tightly around his waist

as he held me

I channeled my burning raw desire

through the seductive undulation of my hips

tempting him

and imploring him with a husky moan.

His groan pierced the nights hot air

and a wicked smile began to spread

across his cruel gorgeous face.

His hand grasped the back of my neck

and tilted back my head with his thumb.

I met eyes of fire that were boring into mine

holding my gaze as they stripped away

every barrier and defense I’d ever known

and freed me of my inhibitions.

The intensity of his eyes never changed

or left mine as he slowly lowered his head

to trace the pulsing vein in my neck

with his tongue,

taking his time as he made a path

straight to the creamy swell of breast

that rested right over my heart.

He paused to take a deep breath

as if he were savoring a precious wine

and he began tracing a circle

over the spot with his tongue

sending a shiver down my spine.

 A low gutteral sound in his chest

vibrated through me

and his fangs lengthened

in preparation to taste me.

He plunged them into the spot on my breast

and my scream echoed through the chambers.

He drank as though he could not get enough 

like he had been starving for too long.

Moaning, his eyes rolled back and

he broke into a feverish sweat.

The pain from the bite I had expected

but it was accompanied by an erotic heat

that left me feeling especially lascivious.

 I could feel him getting harder and more desperate too

and he began to shake with his need to take me.

By the time he was through drinking

we were both insane with the need for each other.

The need for raw, steamy sex permeated our senses

and had us both breathless.

With His steely arms still holding me effortlessly

and my legs still wrapped around him

with lightening speed my back was against the chamber wall

the breath swooshing out of from my lungs from the impact.

He snaked a hand up under my gown

and splayed his hand over my abdomen.

He closed his eyes and groaned

from feeling the heat radiating from my skin.

Sliding his hand lower

he found my heated core and plunged

in two fingers with an abrupt thrust.

I gasped aloud and began rolling my hips

grinding desperately against his hand.

Within seconds the little muscles inside began

a rythmic clenching on his fingers as an orgasm

rippled through my body in delicious waves.

A flood of wet heat poured out as I came on his hand

and I threw my head back in ecstasy.

He gave a shrill, loud hiss as the scent

of my sex hit him hard

and he smiled a wicked smile that made me shutter.

Holding my gaze, he withdrew his hand from inside me.

He slowly brought the hand up to his mouth

and sucked clean those two wicked fingers

that had just pleasured me.

The gesture was so hot and erotic

it made me moan as a burst of

pure lust ripped through me.

I grabbed his hair and pulled him to me

and thrust my tongue in his mouth

for a mind shattering kiss.

I pulled back and lifted my wanton eyes to his.

I could see the impatient, burning desire within them

and feel how rock hard his body was

how ready he was to claim me.

And I was more than ready.

I was dying to have him inside of me…..

Stay tuned for part four…. :)

About celestealluvial

My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content. I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure. I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul. I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.

3 responses to “Dark Lover (part three)

  1. Wow!! So very sexual, exciting, and passionate. I have to say that I get lost in the words and feel like I am indulging in an erotic novel. Very well written Celeste. You indeed have a knack for captivating the reader.

  2. Erotic extravaganza here!

  3. thesubterraneanworld

    I am so waiting for PART 4!!
    This was tremendously passionate and erotic. Well-written Celeste.
    -Naima.

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