Green Man + Haiku

An awesome song, from one of my favorite bands. The lyrics are hauntingly beautiful, and I have added them below the video. I know this band may not be everyone’s cup of tea, indeed it is a minority….but I find they suit a secret part of me well, and their music is unique, speaking to me on an honest and human level. Actually, I have written a handful of poems while playing them in the background, if you can believe that. :)   If it’s not to your liking, cool. If it is, very good. But I think we all agree, the lyrical verse is quite stunning.

I also wrote a haiku, which was inspired by this song. Enjoy.

Haiku:

Standing at the precipice my eyes behold

sky shedding the cloak of twilight

as dawn’s first rays touch the horizon.

Spring won’t come, the need of strife
To struggle to be freed from hard ground
The evening mists that creep and crawl
Will drench in the dew and so drown
I’m the green man
The green man

Sol in prime sweet summertime
Cast shadows of doubt on my face
A midday sun, its caustic hues
Refracting within the still lake

Autumn in her flaming dress
Of orange, brown, gold fallen leaves
My mistress of the frigid night
I worship pray to on my knees
Winter’s breath of filthy snow
Befrosted paths to the unknown
Have my lips turned true purple
Life is coming to an end
So says me, me wiccan friend
Nature coming full circle
I’m the green man

Winter’s breath of filthy snow
Befrosted paths to the unknown
Have my lips turned true purple
Life is coming to an end
So says me, me wiccan friend
Nature coming full circle
I’m the green man
The green man

GORGEOUS!

About celestealluvial

My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content. I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure. I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul. I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.

28 responses to “Green Man + Haiku

  1. Think its the dark of nature that people fear, but even in the fear… there is such beauty and freedom!!!!!

  2. with darkness come great respect and beauty.. :-)

  3. Cool, I love Black no. 1.. R.I.P Peter Steele.

  4. Always gorgeous Celeste. BTW: My comments section, as far as I’m concerned, is all yours !

  5. Amazingly beautiful :) I love your blog and the way you describe things too boldly, you make me go crazy about your writing abilities.
    Thumbs Up!!!
    Much love,
    -Naima.

    • HAHA, Naima! I guess I have gotten bold over the course of this writing journey…. I like that you said that…..thanks always for reading and the warm comments….you are always so generous and candid in your replies, and they are appreciated…..
      love ya
      xoxo

  6. amazing haiku, Love to you, Linda

  7. Gorgeous miss celeste because it is just from your heart
    liking the band too :)
    Boldness never felt so right :) !!!!!!!!!!! xo
    love you xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

    • Thank you sweet Cat…..so you like the band? Very cool….Thanks for always following and being a loving presence here…..
      love you
      xoxoxo

      • all music fascinates me :)
        You knew that :) xo right ?
        xx
        Of Course Celeste ……….
        that’s what humans are supposed to be
        you just said it “loving presences ” xxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxo
        when is number 3 instalment of the story coming ? :) :) :)
        love you too xx
        C

  8. The words are really creative in describing the seasons. The music is esoteric/new wave sounding. I could live with it but i couldn’t write listening to it. it would distract my thought process. But now a day that’s easy to distract. :D

  9. Well i liked it a whole lot! Especially with your Haiku leading in, and the words being printed below…i am feeling it, thanks Celeste, your heart always shines the brightest!

    • Wendell, you never cease to surprise me, and that is no easy feat….thanks so much for all the love and support you give…..your light too shines out bright for all to see….I appreciate your interest and for the warm comment…… :)

  10. Great poem containing grand things.

  11. I was deeply moved by the beautiful haiku, and the combination with the song~I’ve always enjoyed your writing and have rejoiced in your growth of writing, insights, understanding etc and, that you express it beautifully ! THANK you friend ~ye a blessing in my life.~ Hugs, Deborah

    • So glad to see you Deb…. I have missed your presence here, I really have! I have been working mostly on romantic short stories( I think you will enjoy them! :D ) and am really coming into my own….thanks so much for your comment….your words touched me and made me smile….thanks so much….. <3

  12. Very good… aren’t Haikus addicting? I love them.

  13. Type O used to me one my favorites! I was recently triggered to listen to them again, what a fabulous joy to hear this song today. Big Smile. :-D Their lyrics are always amazing.

    “sky shedding the cloak of twilight” beautiful stanza, great haiku!

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