The Chronicles of Uriel and Lilith; a poem
The moonlight shines upon her hair
the eyes of all the damned did stare
enchanted by her beauty fair
each step she took she must beware.
They called to her on every breeze
they watched her from amongst the trees
they longed for her on bended knees
her love could free them from their disease.
For her they fought both day and night
to pursue her affections within plain sight
the victor who won would be given the right
to claim for himself her healing light.
But alas, her soul flew like a dove
her heart she gave to an angel from above
in return, to her he vowed his love
to which the damned swore they’d rid of.
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About celestealluvial
My blog, 'MORTAL HEARTS WITH IMMORTAL SOULS', is a place of fantasy, reality, spirituality and beauty. A place to unwind and find inspiration for the soul. It consists of my personal thoughts and experiences, poetry, prose, quotes, beautiful photos, uplifting music, words of encouragement, and undying love. I welcome respectful, open discussion, sincere opinions and feedback, and encourage any questions you may have personally or of that which pertains to the subject’s content.
I recently began writing a paranormal romance story. It is my dream to become a published author and I have had an amazing experience on this new writing adventure.
I live a quiet life, in the peace and tranquility of beautiful country surroundings. My husband and son are my life and my joy. I am your average person with a passion for reading and writing, and I love to sit and contemplate the mysteries of life and the experience of the human pilgrimage. This is a love story, the journey of our fragile, mortal bodies that have been endowed with the power of an immortal soul.
I do hope you enjoy the content found in this blog. I pour out my heart and soul into each word and lovingly present it to the world, for better or for worse.
Posted in My Angel of night (Uriel and Lilith), My Poetry
Tags: beauty, blogs, damned, heart, Light, love, Online Writing, poem, soul, WordPress
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16 Comments
Mrs. Seuss, the rhyme queen! Love it.
lol….thanks Pete!
Love what you did here Cleste!!! Especially being an avid follower of ‘My Angel Of Night’ – this just makes the tale so much richer and gives a tiny bit of clue/insight as to what may be unfolding as you progress the story. Brava my friend – fantastic work!!!!! xoxo
That is exactly what I hoped it would do, add to the depth of the story. I love your feedback and so appreciate your taking the time to do so……glad you liked it!
Thank you…… <3
I really see after your book becomes a reality…it becoming a movie…you are so talented my sister. Great post!
Oh wow, Mr. Wendell…..that would be something! This made me smile big, thank you!
Celeste; I’ll Saint Augustine words to capture you: “Since love grows within you, so beauty grows. For love is the beauty of the soul.”
Love & Light
That was beautiful, Mira, and a great compliment, thank you!
It is my honor to share the One Lovely Blog Award with you! Stop by and pick it up if you like
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Thanks so much for thinking of me Christina! You are a sweetie and congrats to you too…….
Beautiful! Amazingly stunning!! You can rhyme so well, sweets!!
Hugs,
-Naima.
Awwww, I am glad to know you think so….thanks Naima!
xoxo
Pleasure as always sweetheart!!
-Naima.
Your beautiful words tie your story together very well, Celeste! Well done, my friend~xoxo
you’re wonderful and enticing and tenderhearted characters thrill me! LOVE you ~ Deb
Sometimes I hear words link together in folds of sounds – it is very hard to describe. I heard a beautiful clicking and flow when reading this. Color waves comes to mind. I wish I could find the right words, I hope I make sense. Simply I enjoyed it very much!